starts off amazing but......
My heart was in my mouth for the first minute or so.
because as soon as you see the hawk you know whats about to happen.
I felt this wonderful & overpowering flash was totally destroyed when later on, the one parent bird trys to go rescue his child, then, to totally take the piss, heroically dive under water to rescue his obviously dead son/daughter.
Im going to give this flash 5, perhaph as punishment for turning a gripping and epic story, showing the harshness of reality for animals living in the wild, into a stupid, disney-reject, farytale.
I beg you, fade out and end the flash just as the parent galapagno returnes to his nest to find his partner killed and his chick gone.
It'll make for a far more moving, and far more believable flash.